1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
WWW: Very impressive first assessment Shreyam!
Good understanding and knowledge of denotation, connotation and camera shot types
EBI: Revise mise-en-scene further for examples Qs focusing on text
2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:
Q1: 1
Q2: 1
Q3: 2
Q4: 2
Q5: 1
Q6: 2
Q7: 2
Q8: 3
Q9: 5
Where you didn't achieve full marks, write WHY you think you missed out on the extra marks. Use the indicative content suggestions in the mark scheme to help with this.
3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? If yes, make a note of it here for future revision:
4) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question?
I did better on Q7 because I went into greater detail and I used media terminology.
5) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question?
5) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question?
I didn't do great on Q9 because I didn't write enough to achieve full marks.
6) Re-draft your answer to Q9 and type it out in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer of at least two detailed paragraphs.
6) Re-draft your answer to Q9 and type it out in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer of at least two detailed paragraphs.
Charities use pictures of children to make the consumer feel empathy for them. Children are obviously seen as weak and incapable of taking much care of themselves unlike adults. The producer does this to guilt-trip the consumer into donating. Seeing children suffering can denote that young, innocent lives are suffering, while also connoting that their families and communities are having to look after the children while also suffering from the crisis/issue at the same time. The target audience for charities are older people who may also be looking after children themselves. The older people also have money and seeing the children suffer guilt-trips them into donating.
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